Picture this: You're out biking with your friends, and you're going up a really steep hill. You're pedaling as fast as you can, trying to get up this really steep and long hill. As you're about halfway up the hill, you look behind you, and there's a "sketchy" guy right behind you and you and your friends don't want to take any chances. sSo you pedal faster and faster and faster. oOnce you get up the hill 5five minutes later, you are REALLYreally sweaty, and your feet are so numb you can't step off your bike without falling right head first into the hard solid cement. sSo a couple minutes later you see the same person walk right by you and whabut all they does is say “hi”.
So as a result
, you are furious with yourself and your friends, because you wasted all your energy from gettunning away from no- one. So then you want to get off your bike, but you know you will fall face first into the concrete which will result in a messy bloody disaster, due to your legs being really numb. So you instead position yourself accordingly, and you drop off your bike without a scratch. After that, you crawl to the door which tooak youes about 5five minutes. Once you get to your door, you use tohe handle to ghelp st youand up. Then when you're on your feet, you turn the door handle and the most majestic, satisfying feeling comes across your body, surrounding you like a blanket. That gust of air takes away all that sweat and humidity. You are in paradise. You've got to admit, that feeling is pretty amazing.

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