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: Mum and Dad

From: Laura

Subject: New York, New York!

Professor Brown said that the best way to get the 'feel of a sitycity' was to take a bus tour. We saw so many places. I'm sure I cantcan't remember half of them. Central Park is huge

huge! The tour guide told us it covers 343 acrestacres! The bus took us along the Hudson River

and we could see the Statue of Liberty in the distance. I hope I gotget a chance to see it close up on the ferry. The Empire State Building is on 34th Street. It worewas the tallest

building in the world for 40 years, but there's a bigbigger one in Dubai now. We passed the Metropolitan Museum of Art that Professor Brown says we should visit and we saw

some very famusfamous shops -- Macys BloomingdalesMacy's Bloomingdale's and Saison 5th Avenue. We got off the bus at Times Square, werewhere all the theatres aroare, and walkwalked back to the hotel.

Tomorrow, we can choose where we wantswant to go. ImI'm going on the ferry to the Statue of Liberty and Ellis Island. The, the island are where all imigrantsimmigrants arriving to America, between 1892 and 1954 passed through and were registered. It says in the guidebook that it dealt

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withprocessed 10,000 immigrants a day! Can you believe thatthat? The other people that are here are really great. I've made new friends from all sorts

of different countryscountries. It is really intresting finding outinteresting learning about where they comescome from. Everyone is having a good time. I will write again soon.

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