What I found in this interesting article, whereis that most of the people who are exercising every day, or a couple of times a week, they do not know how dangerous it is, and I was wondering if they know that exercising is really harmful to them. Also, they are getting asthma from the pollution that comes from cars, factories, soil chemicals, and restaurants. People need to be aware of what is happening around them, and we need to step back and thisthink about some of the diseases that become a thing of our life. And one of the paragraphs got my attention which was saying that many kids in California had Asthmaasthma which made me think that less care from the family or school that they are going to, they mentioned because of the exercising. From my perspective, if this Asthmaasthma will be normal in our life, that means we will lose many people because of theair pollution. I was thinking instead of having outdoor places for people to exercise why cannotcan’t we design an indoor place to make sure they are in a safe place orplace? Alternatively, we need to plant a lot of trees to help and hold the pollution.

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